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Post by monkey on May 8, 2015 18:12:31 GMT
Hi all,
I'm working on a new series called Monkey box please have a look.
I will update this thread when there are more to watch.
hope you enjoy.
Monkey
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Post by monkey on May 19, 2015 21:55:46 GMT
Second episode has been done,
Check out my first selection of fly's.
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Post by flatsghost on May 20, 2015 7:43:13 GMT
Hi Monkey
Nice to share your patterns but, lots of the footage is out of focus and the flies are jumping around a lot. I would suggest mounting the flies and filming them in full light rather than in shadow when they are still. Hope you don't mind this feedback but you are obviously enthusiastic and these comments will improve your next effort.
Many thanks
Glyn
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Post by monkey on May 21, 2015 5:34:27 GMT
Hi Monkey Nice to share your patterns but, lots of the footage is out of focus and the flies are jumping around a lot. I would suggest mounting the flies and filming them in full light rather than in shadow when they are still. Hope you don't mind this feedback but you are obviously enthusiastic and these comments will improve your next effort. Many thanks Glyn Feedback is a gift  it just means some one has watched my video and wants to help me improve it. Episode 3 will be done in better light. Do you have any suggestions on flys I should add to the box that would work well around my current flys? |
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Post by flatsghost on May 21, 2015 20:40:14 GMT
Monkey
Rather than suggest new patterns perhaps it might be useful for you to do the original patterns again only better this time! I would personally like to see them again.
I was taught and believe the following - ' there is no such thing as failure only feedback'. Glad you see it that way too.
Good luck with version 2
Glyn
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Post by monkey on May 25, 2015 21:35:04 GMT
Did a remake have a look and let me know what you think.
thanks
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it just means some one has watched my video and wants to help me improve it.